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A Horrible Story: Page 7 by Sketch-Zap A Horrible Story: Page 7 by Sketch-Zap
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The 7th and final page of my comic intro. I wrote, "To be continued" with a question mark because I'm never solid on what I choose to do, if you haven't already figured that out. :) I'm planning (which could mean a heck of a lot of things) to continue, but ya just never know when a meteor could crash onto your face. I mean that by, well, life may get in the way.
Here's page one if you want to read from the start (It's colored!): [link]

P.S. Did you see those computer monitors? Yeah. Right there, the awkward silence panel. A ladder is supposed to be there. But ladders are evil. Their parallel lines are evil. Therefore I had neglected to draw another ladder.

Dr. Horrible, E.L.E, Moist, and Dead Bowie (c) Joss Whedon
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Concoline Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
I love the pencil thing. "Why am I so excited about a pencil?" I love the second to last box of dr horrible. He looks so serious! It's a really good drawing!
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe, one of my favorite pages.
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Concoline Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Definitely! I love that one
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jocalderonesbabymama Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
I fxcking love Dr. Horrible. He's so fxcking adorable.
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mmm yes! I can't stop obsessing.
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oopsies101 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
[Fireclaw] heheh, you are crazy Dr...Who?*does that on purpose*
[me]*face palm*
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, not Dr. Who, silly. :)
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oopsies101 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
[fireclaw] I know. I'm say "Who" because I'm playing dumb. The why in this is because I'm saying I evidentally "forgot" his name!*starts laughing hard*
[me] oh fireclaw... Don't play dumb it's weird
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GeniusFace90 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Filmographer
it better be to be continued * squinty eyes*
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AAHHH YOUR PRESSURING MEEEE....
;) Just kidding. This has gotten WAY more response than I have anticipated, so I think it will be continued. But remember comics take time to storyboard, draw, and ink, so you'll have to be patient. :)
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qtpye72 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i love this. :)
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
I love you for loving this. ;)
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Dreamin-Of-Cheese Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is immense. Pure immenseness. Your cartoons are amazing and I love the story, it looks so professional and is just, well...amazing. PLEASE DO SOME MORE! Pretty please! =D
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GAHHH PRESSURE! ;) Thank you SO much. I really liked your story too. Today I had nearly a million ideas going through my head of how to continue this. Too bad finals are this week. (Gah... evil finals- they should have a league of their own.) By the way, not to bother, but how far are you on the next chapter of the story?
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Dreamin-Of-Cheese Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm really glad you like my story! =D
The next chapter is ALMOST done, would've been done ages ago had I not had to revise like a maniac for my A-Levels (grr...not fun).
Anywho, just gonna reiterate how much I love your cartoons, and how very much I'd love to see how it progresses. Good luck with your finals! =)
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I will try my best on both the comic and the finals! I can't wait to see the next chapter! :)
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Dreki-K Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it so far! :D Keep up the good work!
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll try my best! :)
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Donteatacowman Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
Oh, man, amazing job! I wasn't expecting such a professional comic when I first started reading. I like your style a lot. Awesome. :D
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thank you! I'm just starting out- it's REALLY nice to hear that! Thanks so much!
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Donteatacowman Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
Welcome! :D
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Mr-Kostan Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
Awwww ♥
I loove it :D It's sooo great :D
A pencil, a pencil, a pencil ~ *dancing happily*
I laughed so hard about all the rays, and stuff, our lil' Dr. did :D Forgot about the Amnesia bombs... and a 5 year old Billy~ ♥ So sweeet :D
I like the way you designed the backgrounds. They are nice spreaded and the pages don't seem overfilled so :3 (Is it clear, what I want to say? ...I'm not quite sure if I can use 'spread' here... *my english sucks >_>*)
I like the way how you color the pages, but I'm not quite sure if the black-and-white ones aren't better. The story - and especially Billys feelings- are a little depressing in the moment, and the gloomy, dark colors are very helpfull for the atmosphere, if you know what I mean? It's your decission, but I think, that Moist's hair for example is looking much more sweaty and oily with out color (but Horrys haircolor is just wooonderfull :D)
The E.L.E-basis is very amazing designed (so horrorfull ♥), and I like the idea of Dead Bowie looking for cats :D (C'mere kitty, kitty~)
Wonderfull storyline, great designed, lovely characters - I'm looking forward for a zombie-pseudo-Penny :P
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D :D
You make me happpyyyy!
I can usually understand what people are trying to say, so don't worry. I'm really happy you like the comic. I was originally going to color the whole thing, but my time got crunched. That one scene with all the amnesia bombs and little Billy was going to be more detailed (at least with color) but I'm really glad you liked it. (I just had to put the, "I forget about that one..." In there)
I was trying to make it look gloomy in the beginning, so I'm glad I got that through. (Also I'm really used to shading like that.) I'm going to try to be more on the lighter side after this though- that's the main emotion of the movie, anyway.
As for the E.L.E, they were actually mentioned in the comic, so none of the designs should be thought as mine. :) I should probably say that in the comic... :)
As for PEnny, I think she'll be regenerated or something. I'm planning her to be a part of the story, if you know what I mean. She'll be walking around soon, and so I have to think of some sort of problem that Horrible or the E.L.E. will have to face. I'm really unsure about the whole thing- I'm finding out things pretty much just as fast as you are! ;) (Ok, I got some stuff in my head, but you get the point.)
I'm also glad you liked the story line- I thought they were just hanging around a tad too much. Anyway, I will forever hate drawing ladders. Do you know how many I had to draw? ;) I swear, I hold people who are masters at drawing ladders in a high place in my heart. I give them much respect, for ladders are evil and their parallel lines are killer to draw. :)
I'm super happy you liked this!
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katgirl900214 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
I have a feeling I know where this is going ^_^

Also I see a definite improvement already in the first 8 pages. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Sketch-Zap Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You can see improvement because it was done over three months. :D (Yeah, I'm a terrible procrastinator.)
And to tell you the truth, I have no idea where this is going. I have a few snippits in my head here and there of course, but I have a huge black hole in the story that needs to be filled. You know how they say, "It's the journey, not the destination at the end?" Yeah, I think I got the journey down, just... not the destination, or the main objective. I gotta figure that out. :)
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