I love the "I'm under your car." I love how he's so casual. Just like "Oh yeah don't mind me. Chilling under your car." I just realised I'm commenting on every page I'm (re) reading today. I started at chapter two for some reason.
Haha, that's one of my favorite parts too. I tried to give that vibe that Bowie could easily act casual if he wanted to. I think I've found my first fan. I can't believe someone would actually re-read my stuff. X)