Whatchu talking about? The detail in the mouth is insane. I think it came out very nicely. Even if it is a little off, that's fine! No one's going to know but you. XD Unless you say something. Which you did, but I'll pretend I didn't see that. GOOD JOB ON THE MOUTH AND THE DETAIL AND EVERYTHING.
You definitely are! I'm excited to see how you improve. You're DEFINITELY better than I was as a freshman. I'm not even sure if I've got that kind of control over pencil now. I've loosened up a lot... Maybe I'll try drawing in detail with pencil again...
Well, pencil is pretty much my field- that's pretty much the tool I have most practice with. Paint is another thing, but yeah. I'm sure if you would practice you'd gain the control again. Still, if loose is your style, than that's your style.
I can totally tell its you. I won't lie, the mouth was the first thing my eyes went to... but otherwise its really good. Tweeks here and there willl have you on the right track. And if you don't like the mouth practice. ^_^ But you know that.